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| Edited by: Randy Sturridge |
Clones of shattered youth are born
Evacuated shells of previous generations
Emotionless days and vacant dinner tables
Hard tiled floors of a cultureless nation
Perpetuating activism fighting for others
Bi-products of war and deaths of mothers
Speeches of yesterday drown out the skies
Propelling future hopes of past mentioned times
Everything colorless with senses so plain
Society forgotten with faith in nation deranged
Clones built on promises of better days
Slowly accepting all these shades of grey
Randy Sturridge
10 comments:
great poem. Nicely written :)
Thank you very much...generally shorter than most of my poetry but if every one can relate and take something from this, then it is worth putting up. Thanks again.
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awesome write here.
Brinkka2011...I do have an RSS through Feedburner and Netvibes, I will put the widget on here soon so more can subscribe by email...here is the link to my RSS
http://feeds.feedburner.com/blogspot/EeRKD
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Thank you for your comment I greatly appreciate...I will be sure to look into our work as well...thank you kindly.
Randy- another excellent write. Theme is universal and well-stated. Lines work well individually and in relation to the entire write. But what I like most is, especially in a poem such themed, that you kept a mono-toned voice throughout the poem- perfect pacing for this type of piece- You've been doing a great job layering and constructing your poems beneath the surface lately. When I first started reading your work I liked the pieces but they weren't nearly as layered or detailed structurally as they are now. Great job-love seeing an evolution in progress:)
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Fred, as always you seem to be able to help me understand my own poetry better than myself. Thank you for always taking that extra minute to not only read but give perspective and feedback that I assure you is the most valuable contribution that I most whole-heartedly value and live for. Thank you sir. I will be stopping by poeticalpsyche.blogspot.com shortly to care your most recent posts...
Thank you sir.
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Beyond the traditional, Thank you, How kind, Very Nice of you...I would just like to say your comment initially had me second guessing the validity in truth as I would not have expected to receive anything like this for much of anything I have written....haha especially since I wrote this in about 12 minutes at a gas station...
However, my presumption was indeed proven incorrect after doing a bit of research and with that I can only express my gratitude and humility in receiving such a substantially genuine and value worthy post as this. I thank you greatly for providing such positive feedback as well as showing it to your friend whom as you said bought you breakfast for the read. To that I am very (yet again)grateful that I was able to excite one enough to feed another haha.. I do like this path and subject of poetry and have written a few more and they will be released in the coming days...Thank you again sir and be sure, if you would like to recieve updates on any releases to follow the blog on the top right...
thank you.
Randy, I enjoy reading everything that you've been writing. You're a man of many words. I love you son.
Hiya momma. Thank you for commenting...I always wonder if you make your way here often or not, but as you have said you always do. I will give you a call, sorry have been off the grid lately as you know I tend to do. Just trying to find my way along this tumultuous course I've set for myself. I love you momma.
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