Delirium Sets in
consider it sin
Thirty minutes time and Ill
be swimming again
Drivin with white
knuckles
Cigarette Smoke Constant
Mr are you okay
Thanks for asking but no
not today
Pissed off Putt me on a
cross
Crucify this mind
With blood and sweat I
resign
Hope out of reach
Stay Positive they teach
Impossible gestures
When my body aches and
then festers
99 degrees how about a
little reprieve please
To much to handle lifes
little scandals
Randy Sturridge
5 comments:
Randy- Another great job of making connections throughout the piece. So many examples, but Pissed off put me on a cross- then crucify- then resign followed up with Hope- So not a real pattern in and of itself- can be connecting through the likeness of association or from the absence of such. Lots more in here too- And reprieve is a favorite word of mine- so that was cool there at the end. Very nicely spun, thanks
This was actually written quite a while ago and I completely forgot about it. Came upon it a couple of days ago when going through a past journal. Glad you enjoyed it.
word . . . premise. word. i'll share
Tribute....Thanks,
sometimes its hard to tell if the state above is of hate, hurt, or ....it just means another end is reached. rarr
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