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| Edited by: Randy Sturridge |
Remembering
new heights that brightened all colors
Confused the
senses and blotted out others
Remembering
sensations that drove peculiar decisions
Feeling of
euphoria that stained aching to flesh
The first
Unveiling of Loves deep conviction
Remains fresh
in the mind, ripe for the picking
Remember
trying to convey how it felt
Fear,
Excitement, winds from the heavens
Explosions,
delirium that no-one could see
Just hearing
her name stopped time where it stood
Knowing that
Love had permeated the soul
Twenty horses
couldn’t slow Loves fermenting strength
Bursting
Unsure with conflicted annoyance
Love
enthralled, consumed all the senses
Reeking of
beautiful warm renditions
Electric
memories of Loves sweet conviction
Stays locked
in this heart ripe for the picking
Embracing new
heights that brightened all colors
Uniting in brief
seconds one soul to another
Randy Sturridge
2 comments:
Interesting piece here Randy. I like how you were in full rhyming mode to kick the poem off and sort of went away from that but then picked up some off-rhyme stuff later on, kind of like a poetic jam session you had with yourself here- pretty cool stuff here to go along with some neat lines- I know it's probably not even the best one in this piece, but something about twenty horses couldn't slow love's fermenting strength I find pretty darned cool as heck. Excellent job, thanks
Thanks Fred, I wrote this last night, or very early this morning...
Wrote this with another which I will post soon. Been getting little waves of creativity lately so definitely drawing and writing. Will be putting some art up shortly as well. Thank you as always my friend.
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