Saturday, September 10, 2011

Drawing: Gaze

Look about the room,
Canvas all the corners
Catch a gazing stare
Look away moving on

                   Look about the room
                   Full of silent watching
                   Facing forward all but one
                   Look that way just for fun
                                         He is staring still he stares     
                                         Why's he facing backwards                     
                                          A slow spreading smile
                                          Contorts his long wry face

                                                            Open mouth empty eyes
                                                             Blanket, alone, in pain
                                                             He settles back in his seat
                                                             Facing forward, conforming                    

The strange things that happen. That we will never know why...

Randy Sturridge


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Fred said...

You're hitting a bunch of truths these past couple of pieces. Nice write again, love the styling here too. The last line, separated from the descending staircase is a really nice touch

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