Sweet,
sensational force
Headwind
stinging skin
Swell
by swell a set on high
Seven
counts and she builds the horizon
Wait!
I stop paddling and erect myself
Vision
peaks over number six
It’s all wrong but she is
massive
A lion
among wolves, I hear her
Fleeting
and curious she takes new aim
I
gaze north and scan south, plenty of room
The
face is mine but I must hurry
She
is a steam engine, her force dangerously inviting
Thirty
yards north she, number seven, comes with tide wind
As
I begin to lay upon my vessel, I feel the shift
Onshore
winds subside, abrupt
The
whole ocean is churning with this new change
Offshore
winds to welcome my wonderful giant
Number
six flies past leaving white stallions
Sea
Mist coats my bare flesh and I’m
off
Dig,
dig, get it deep and pull, I am lion
I
will meet my friendly foe on her wayward course
Pump,
pull, stop!
I angle
forward and feel myself become weightless
I
have made it, and now we dance
I
am a feather and I want the wind
I
deserve this seven
I
pull myself up in the free fall
12
foot face of ocean, clear, emotional
I
lean in and she folds over me
But
right, ducked low I touch her
I
feel her smooth, terrible strength
And
for seconds, in her barrel
The
lion, The feather, The stallions and the Great Beauty that is number is mine
and I am hers.
Randy Sturridge
3 comments:
Nice, brief and to the point again- seems like you're mastering the short form- Always nice to diversify- and you do it well. Great metaphor in here and I'm thinking you went out to Kiawah or that public beach out that way or perhaps out to the Isle. Some good waves about now. Good read, thanks
I’ve sat on the beach and watched surfers all my life. What I’ve noticed is the best ones respect the power of the water and find unity with the wave...there is a fluidity there that cannot be matched.
My favorite line
“But right, ducked low I touch her
I feel her smooth, terrible strength”
It totally conveys the respect and relationship you have with the wave and water...incredible read!
Wonderful article to my mind. Keep it up!
Anna Camson
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