tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5630282752038030041.post6614080072770582351..comments2012-11-21T15:05:03.156-05:00Comments on The Mind Canvas: Invariable MemoriesTheLargeYardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06573119402023840691noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5630282752038030041.post-45466230563928192002011-07-15T11:44:09.935-04:002011-07-15T11:44:09.935-04:00Randy, really good job here. The piece as a whole...Randy, really good job here. The piece as a whole is quite interesting. You start off by simply beginning a poem, then move to pause, contemplation even hesitancy, then you just blow the whole thing up, really love the ending here it's jumbled, blaring out at you and then speckled with mixture of what is and what can never be again, providing a nice inspirational message there. Very good job hereAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.com